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Hibiscus - Mc Claren Aaron


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  1. Anonymous3/12/21, 2:25 AM

    Hi Mc Claren. I loved the concept of your poem and your hibiscus is just beautiful. Maybe there could be some more descriptive words in the poem? Other than that, you're on roght track my fellow poet!

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    1. Anonymous3/12/21, 2:26 AM

      *right, sorry. Typos these days am I right? (Insert laughing emoji)

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